Poor Imp

Sure. Or they hadn't thought it was, right? -Tov No. -Piers -- Why tell the truth rather than lie?

I can't remember. ...Hey--honest. -Tov What I remember...because lying makes it easier when you've lied to yourself too. Bloody well don't believe it. -Piers -- Do you lie only about ...

Organised resistance in...er... Hell. Ask Teller. Rebel under anarchy, right? Ha. -Tov Rebellion is bloody confused when it's against an order that's not there, and something damn well not established

In very brief: You've got a subject that's apt. School as a prison, peers and such--but you're telling more as if it were prose than describing. School is hell on ...

Hey Lottie. ^_^ And welcome, naturally, to YWS. If you're works up in the literary forums (dramatic poetry) it will get critiqued...sometimes it takes a day or two, depending. But ...

Tired? Of course not, right? Hell. Who notices if you're sleeping on your feet? -Tov Bloody tired. Doubtless waking half the night--doesn't help. Or tired of Tov? -Piers -- How ...

Hunckback...confused me. And terrified me. Frollo's 'desire' for Esmerelda was really icky. The music was incredible though. "God Help the Outcasts" is one of my all time favorite pieces. Have ...

*squee* Thank you! Though... the Latin in that is all funky, LOL. There's no K in the Latin alphabet. Haha... that makes me happy... :P Hunchback of Notre Dame is ...

...I didn't get it, 'seems.

This is the first time EVER that I actually have an ending for a story, lol! I actually have a lot planned out, but I'm so terrified that I won't ...

It's an excellent idea.

I get what you mean. I'm unsure of my WHOLE ending though and of a large part of my plot, kind of...I'm sure I could fix a good part of ...

Oh yeah. Cass, you better show me yours! I'm excited with it... I just spent a half an hour explaining my plot to my boyfriend (he was curious) and I ...

Dumas not only is brilliant, but has fencing, of course. ^_^ I hope your profs. will let-up on the assignments--the Fantasy Fools miss your challenge entries. !_!"

Ahoy Pivot! Welcome to YWS and all that. ^_^ It is, all in all, an excellent place for the prose or poetry inclined. If you've got any questions, the FAQ ...